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vaIraMganaa–2

dao saala yaUM hI baIt gayao qao. maOM dsavaIM maoM Aa gayaa qaa AaOr naIlaaMjanaa baarhvaIM maoM. hma AaOr AcCo daost bana cauko qao. hlkI maUMCo Aanao ka maora baosaba` [Mtja,ar Aba lagaBaga K%ma hao calaa qaa. naIlaaMjanaa kI samasyaaeM Aba j,yaada saaf qaIM maoro saamanao. vah Apnao p`it maoro pagalapna Baro AakYa-Na pr hMsanao kI Aba kBaI kBaI hlkI mauskurahT dotI qaI. k[- baar maOM jaanabaUJa kr kOmaosT/I laOba maoM Apnao po`i@Tkla ko baad BaI dor tk Ék jaata qaa AaOr naIlaaMjanaa kI @laasa ko Aanao ka [Mtja,ar krta. saba kuC bahut hI AakYa-k qaa‚ naSaIlaa qaa. pZ,a[- maoM jaaoSa qaa… naIlaa kao p`Baaivat krnao ko ilayao AaiKr mauJao BaI maOirT maoM Aanaa qaa. AaOr sabakao mauJasao ]mmaIdoM qaIM. Agar eosaa haota tao ]saI CaoTo ksbao ko ]saI baa^yaja, saInayar saOkoND/I skUla ka maOM paMcavaa Ca~ haota. ]sa skUla maoM kuC Kasa baat qaI‚ hmaaro TIcasa- bahut samaip-t AQyaapk qao. caaho ifj,aI@sa ko paNDo sar haoM yaa kOmaosT/I kI sauSaIlaa maODma yaa baayaaolaaojaI ko DorkI sar… pZ,naa baaoiJala nahIM lagaa. ]sa pr naIlaaMjanaa kao kond` banaa calata maora Avacaotna Ñ Aba BaI hma tInaaoM pUra baaja,ar par kr gailayaaM GaUma Gaama kr ASaaok ko Gar jaayaa krto qao‚ iTifna Kanao.

basa yahIM Aakr va@t kI Daor kao iCTknaa qaa. papa ka T/ansafr hao gayaa AaOr turnt hmaoM jaanaa pD,a. maOM maOirT maoM AazvaaM sqaana laayaa‚ AKbaar maoM ]sa baD,o Sahr ko naamaI skUla ka naama Aayaa pr maOM ApnaI kRt&ta &aipt krnao ]sa ksbao tk gayaa‚ SaaokI ko Gar zhra saba TIcasa- kao Qanyavaad idyaa.

maorI ]mmaId ko ivaprIt naIlaaMjanaa pIº emaº TIº kI tOyaarI krnao kI jagah baIº ka^maº p`a[-vaoT ka fama- Bar rhI qaI.

" nahIM naIlaa…tumanao baat nahIM kIÆ "
" kI qaI … qaPpD, BaI Kayaa. bahut ija,d BaI kI… AnaSana BaI ikyaa … [sa baar ASaaok nao BaI bahsa kI baD,o papa sao. paNDo sar nao Aakr Gar pr baat kI… ik mat kraAao kaoicaMga baahr Baoja kr yahIM rh kr hma pZ,a doMgao pr pI ema TI tao donao dao. "

bahut ]dasa qaI naIlaajaMnaa. maOM @yaa krta AaiKrÆ

" maaonTU tU tao donaa pIº emaº TIº Ñ "
" haЂ dUMgaa." halaaMik maorI Éica Aa[-º Aa[-º TIº donao kI qaI… pr naIlaajaMnaa ka Aaga`h AaOr Aa[-ºAa[-ºTIº laayak tOyaarI kI kmaI kI vajah sao maOM nao pIº emaº TIº donaa hI zIk samaJaa. maora maaoh CUTa nahIM ]sa ksbao sao‚ ek baar ifr papa ]saI ksbao ko pasa ko Sahr maoM T/ansafr haokr Aae qao tba maOM pIº emaº TIº kI tOyaarI kr rha qaa Ajamaor rh kr. pIº emaº TIº dokr ek idna ko ilayao maOM ifr vahaÐ laaOTa — naIlaaMjanaa ka baIº ka^maº fa[-nala [yar cala rha qaa. ASaaok nao BaI maoiDkla kI jagah ka^masa- kao caunaa qaa. " yaar krnaa tao ibaja,naosa hI hO." ka tk- dokr.

]sa idna Saama ko QauMQalako maoM hvaolaI kI Ct pr gavaaxaaoM kI pD,tI ToZ,I maoZ,I Cayaa ko naIcao maOM nao phlaI baar Kula kr ]sao kha qaa —

" naIlaaMjanaa‚ @yaa Aba BaI nahIM jaana sakI ik…maOM dIdI @yaaoM nahIM kh saka tumhoMÆ "
" pagala hao Saantnau tuma."
" Talaao matÑ "
" tao @yaa khUM [sa baovakUfI pr. AakYa-Na qaa tumhara."
" qaaÆ"

tba ]sakI AaMKoM AaScaya- sao fOla ga[- qaIM. maOM nao ksa kr ]saka haqa pkD, ilayaa qaa.

" qaaÆ yao jaao maOM yahaÐ laaOT laaOT kr Aata hUÐ… vah 'qaa' kOsao hao gayaa… AakYa-Na qaa‚ hO AaOr hmaoSaa rhogaa. maora basa calata tao sabasao JagaD, kr Apnao Gar lao jaata ifr hma saaqa saaqa pIº emaº TIº doto."

]sakI AaMKoM Bar Aa[-M qaIM. maOM nao ksa kr ApnaI Aakar laotI doh ko saainnaQya maoM ]sa pUNa- yauvait kao Bar ilayaa qaa. AaOr svayaM kao pUNa- puÉYa mahsaUsa kr ]sao xaiNak sahara dokr gavaa-invat qaa. pr yah gava- vyaqa- qaa. xaINa qaa. yah vah BaI jaanatI qaI.

ijasasao ]sao saamanaa krnaa qaa‚ vah ksbaa[- samaaja ka $iZ,vaadI jaD, ihssaa qaa. ijasamaoM laD,ikyaaoM kI pZ,a[- kI saImaa p`a[-vaoT baIºeº pr jaakr K%ma hao jaatI qaI. naIlaaMjanaa nao ifr BaI emaº ka^maº ikyaa. maora salao@Sana maOiDkla maoM hao cauka qaa. ek baar ASaaok ko ha^sTla Aanao pr ]saIsao pta calaa qaa ik emaº ka^maº ka irja,lT Aanao sao phlao hI ]sakI SaadI ]sa ksbao ko pasa hI ek AaOr CaoTo ksbao ko $iZ,vaadI vyaaparI pirvaar maoM hao ga[- hO. laD,ka svayaM kuC nahIM krta. dsavaIM pasa hO. ipta kI Aqaah sampi<a AaOr [sa hvaolaI jaOsaI hI ek AaOr hvaolaI kI kOd hO … ijasamaoM naIlaaMjanaa sqaanaantirt kr dI ga[- hO.

yahaÐ @yaa j,yaadatr BaartIya ksbaaoM‚ gaaMvaaoM kI laD,ikyaaoM ka yahI hEa haota hO. ek kOd sao inakla kr dUsarI kOd…. Aba jaakr badlaava Aayaa hO SahraoM maoM ik laD,ikyaaM Akolao baahr jaakr pZ,a[- AaOr naaOkrI baKUbaI krtI hOM‚ SaadI kao p`aqaimakta Apnao kOiryar ko baad hI dotI hOM‚ maata ipta BaI svayaM kao nahIM qaaopto ]na pr laoikna pta nahIM ik ksbaaoM maoM Aaja @yaa haota hO. pr SahraoM maoM baZ,to galsa- ha^sTla yahI saMkot doto hOM ik ksbaaoM‚ gaaMvaaoM kI laD,ikyaaoM maoM BaI badlaava Aayaa hO‚ jaao ja,ra pZ,nao maoM AcCI haotI hOM ja,$r Aagao AatI hOM. naIlaajaMnaa tumhoM dor sao janma laonaa qaa.

ASaaok kI SaadI maoM ]sasao imalaa qaa‚ BaarI ja,rI ko lahMgaa caunnaI maoM‚ ek baccaI kao gaaod maoM ilayao naIlaaMjanaa ko [sa $p sao tada%mya nahIM ibaza pa rha qaa maOM. naaraja, qaa maOM. pr iksasao ]saI sao jaao [sa vyavsqaa ka iSakar qaaÆ [sa samaaja saoÆ ]sa hzIlao ipta saoÆ na jaanao iksa sao … pr ]saI sao JagaD, pD,a qaa maOM jaao baurI trh Aaht qaa.

"jaldI pD,I qaI tumhoMÆ"
" mauJaoÑ "
" ivaraoQa…Æ "
" … ikyaa qaa. mana ikyaa qaa Aa%mah%yaa kr laUM."
" har maana laI tuma jaOsaI laD,kI naoÆ"
" @yaa krtI SaantnauÆ Baaga jaatIÆ khaÐ Æ tuma nahIM samaJaaogao. baD,o haoto AaOr mauJao saMBaalanao laayak haoto tao ja,$r tumharo pasa Aa jaatIÑ "

Aagao @yaa khta maOMÆ kaÐp kr rh gayaa qaa‚ ]sakI AaMKaoM ko Aaht Baava sao. ]sakI baccaI Acaanak gaaod maoM baMQao baMQao rao pD,I qaI AaOr vah BaI BaarI plakoM lao kr mauD, ga[- qaI. Apnao Aap pr gaussaa Aayaa ik maOM BaI @yaa baat lao baOza qaa. ]sako baad vah saba [tnaI Ajanabaa lagaa ik ASaaok ko irsaoPSana tk nahIM Ék saka qaa maOM.

Aaja saba kuC badla gayaa hO. pr maora mana Aba BaI ]sako baaro maoM jaananao kao ]%sauk hO.

"naIlaajaMnaa… … " ASaaok AaOr maOM SaadI kI raOnakoM CaoD, kr ha^Tla kI laa^baI maoM Aa jaato hOM.
maOM isagaroT saulagaata hUÐ. vah khta hO…
" Da^@Tr haokr isagaroT…Æ"
" haЂ yaa|r‚ Da^@Tr hUЂ Saayad [saIilayao… [tnaI vyastta hO [sa xao~ maoMÑ tnaava BaI kma nahIM."
" SaadIÆ "
" kI naa yaa|rÑ maorI hI baOcamaoT hO. hma daonaaoM hI Baagao ifrto hOM. ek baoTa hO‚ baaoiD-Mga maoM pZ,ta hO."
" tU naIlaaMjanaa ko ilayao pUC rha qaa na…Æ"
" … "
" vah harI nahIM maaonTU… Aaja vah ek safla caaTo-D eka]nTonT hO.
" kOsaoÆ " sauKd AaScaya- maoM DUba kr pUCa qaa maOM nao.
" bassa‚ baoTI ko ja,ra baD,o haonao ko baad vah Apnao pit kao ija,d krko Baaopala lao ga[- qaI… jahaÐ ]naka ibaja,naosa kI ek ba`anca qaI. vahaÐ jaakr saI e ikyaa AaOr basa saarI rahoM Apnao Aap Kula ga[-M. ]sa jaOsaI TolaonToD laD,kI har kOsao maana laotIÆ ek baar maayako Aanao pr imalaI qaI AaOr kha qaa ik kBaI Saantnau sao imalaao tao khnaa naIlaaMjanaa nao har nahIM maanaI‚ rasta banaa hI ilayaa."
" sacaÑ" idla sao KuSa qaa maOM‚ ek malaala saa jaao vaYaao-M Avacaotna maoM rhta Aayaa qaa Acaanak imaT gayaa.
"pr Aba sasaurala vaalao naaraja, hOM."
" haÐ ASaaok‚ pr iksa iksa kao KuSa ikyaa jaa sakta hO svayaM kao Aaht krto rh kr BaIÆ ifr BaI saba KuSa nahIM hao pato " maOM nao zNDI saaMsa laI.
" yah baat pto kI khI tUnao. naIlaajaMnaa ka nambar lao lao kBaI faona pr hI baat kr laonaa."

haÐ Ñ ]sa jaItI hu[- laD,kI kao baQaa[- donao ka maora bahut mana hO Aaja… Aaja hI haoTla laaOT kr ]sasao baat kÉMgaa. KulaI hvaa AcCI laga rhI qaI AaOr na jaanao @yaa saaoca kr isagaroT bauJaa dI maOM nao.

manaIYaa kulaEaoYz
isatmbar 30‚ 2002 

Dear Manishaji,
Heartiest congratulations on producing an awesome story "Virangana". I really loved it and hope that each and every Indian woman/girl reads the story and gets inspired by the same. It is high time we , the women of India took  up the responsibility of living and realizing our dreams . The battle might have started long back but unfortunately it is far from the end point (Poonahuti). I pray that god gives us strength to break the shackles imposed on us by the society. May every Neelanjana realize her dream(s) till the end. Please keep up the good work!! Best wishes.
– Vijaya Subramaniam, November 15, 2002

BaartIya samaaja ivaSaoYaaMk 
BaartIya samaaja ko sandBa- maoM – sampadkIya
[smat Aapa kI khainayaaÐ AaOr BaartIya mauislama samaaja – manaIYaa kulaEaoYz 
ek ivad`aohI svarÁ tsalaImaa nasarIna kI kivataeM – saaih%ya kaoYa
khanaI
Aaifsar – jayanandna 
knyaa hI dhoja hO – manaIYaa kulaEaoYz 
kbaUtrI – hrdSa-na sahgala 
Kala ko BaItr ka saca – jayaa jaadvaanaI
iKD,ikyaaÐ – ivakoSa inaJaavana 
QaOya- – ]ima- kRYNa 
baaÐQaao na naava [sa zaÐva‚ banQau Ñ – ]ima-laa iSarIYa
raKI – sauYamaa maunaInd` 
irSto – Aasqaa
vaIraMganaa – manaIYaa kulaEaoYz
Sahr maoM Plaoga – ivaSvamaaohna itvaarI‚ pUva- eAr vaa[-sa maaSa-la
Saor ko ipMjaD,o maoM – naIlama kulaEaoYz 
i~yaacair~ – AMkuSa maaOnaI 
saMsmarNa laoK  
bahu$ipyaa – manaIYaa kulaEaoYz 
ihndI samaaja pr maisa-yaa
fja,la [maama maillak
vyaMgya
Qama- – naIlama kulaEaoYz 
kivata
Aaja kI Sakuntlaa
Da^º ranaU mauKjaI-
[sa pla
manaIYaa kulaEaoYz
ek iklakarI AQaUrI saI – Da^ Ajaya kumaar jaOna
kama baa[- kI laD,kI – Da^ Ajaya kumaar jaOna 
iksaI AaOr trIko sao – jayaa jaadvaanaI
caumbana – jayaa jaadvaanaI 
jaIvana ko samaanaantr jaIvana – manaIYaa kulaEaoYz
jaugalabandI – rit sa@saonaa   
naTraja – SaOlaond` caaOhana 
basaMt vaacaala – SaOlaond` caaOhana 
baItraga – rajaoSa jaOna
saat saaO maIla dUr sao ek patI CaoTI bahna kao – saMjaya kumaar gauPt  
hmaara samaaja – rajaond` kRYNa

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